What changes I want to make to my coursework

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Peer feedback that I want to do:

Small things:
1) Change the typo of Madeleine on page 2


Bigger things:
1) Consider cutting a few characters because they are not developed enough

2) Develop characters further

3) Make sure it is clear when the narrator interrupts the dialogue in the scene











QUESTIONS
Do you specify music in the script?

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